张爱玲色戒经典语录及短评
老婆大人让发的红包,说不发就揍我,我也没办法呀!还说没人领也要揍我,我好无奈!!!
《色戒》英译本出自Julia Lovell 女士之手。Lovell女士是剑桥大学中国历史和文学教授,已出版多部中国题材的著作和译作。比如最新的《长城:中国面对世界》(The Great Wall: China Against the World, 1000 BC-AD 2000)以及韩少功的《马桥词典》英译本等。
张爱玲小说的翻译,似乎只有女性能胜任。不说文思细密,就是那服装和打扮的描写,比如王佳芝在麻将桌上的装扮,令我等望而却步:“云鬓蓬松往上扫,后发齐肩,光着手臂,电蓝水渍纹缎齐膝旗袍,小圆角衣领只半寸高,像洋服一样。领口一只别针,与碎钻镶蓝宝石的‘纽扣’耳环成套。”
Lovell女士却信笔译来,举重若轻: “She had her hair pinned nonchalantly back from her face, then allowed to hang down to her shoulders. Her sleeveless cheongsamof electric blue moiré satinreached to the knees, its shallow, rounded collar standing only half an inch tall, in the western style. A brooch fixed to the collar matched her diamond-studded sapphire button earrings.”
我另外摘录小说中关键场景译文如下,作为汉译英范例,与英语同好们共同学习:
色戒经典台词 中英互译
在珠宝店,王佳芝心神不宁,在钻戒的璀璨里,为情而伤。
“这个人是真爱我的,她突然想,心下轰然一声,若有所失。”
He really loves me, she thought. Inside she felt a raw tremorof shock—then a vague sense of loss.
易先生脱险后,余悸未消,心系红颜,悔愧交加。
“她临终一定恨他。不过‘无毒不丈夫’.不是这样的男子汉,她也不会爱他。”
She must have hated him at the end. But real men have to be ruthless. She wouldn't have loved him if he'd been the sentimental type.
“得一知己,死而无憾。他觉得她的影子会永远依傍他,安慰他。虽然她恨他,她最后对他的感情强烈到是什么感情都不相干了,只是有感情。他们是原始的猎人与猎物的关系,虎与伥的关系,最终极的占有。她这才生是他的人,死是他的鬼。”
But now that he had enjoyed the love of a beautiful woman, he could die happily-without regret. He could feel her shadow forever near him, comforting him. Even though she had hated him at the end, she had at least felt something. And now he possessed her utterly, primitively-as a hunter does his quarry, a tiger his kill. Alive, her body belonged to him; dead, she was his ghost.
易先生:「我能够带你 这里,我就比你更懂得做娼妓。」
「要干就干票大的!」
不吃辣,怎能胡得出辣子?
易先生:「只要留心, 有什么事是小事!」
王佳芝:「他不但要往我的身体里钻,还要像像蛇一样的往我心里面越钻越深」/
Mr. Yi: "I can take you to come here, I know better than you doprostitutes. "
"To do it big ticket! "
Do not eat spicy food, how can mount a spicy?
Mr. Yi: "as long as the look, nothing is trivial! "
Wang Jiazhi: "he not only gets inaide me, but like a snake to my heart going deeper and deeper."
生命诚可贵,爱情价更高,若为自由故,二者皆可抛。先是为了自由,王佳芝放弃了爱情,后来为了爱情,她却放弃了生命。比生命更重要的是爱情,比爱情更重要的是自由。